In the first draft workshop of the quarter, the main critique my peers had with my paper was my opposing argument. I used the fact that Watchmen was less popular than other classic superhero films as evidence of my thesis. However, my opposing argument gave other reasons for Watchmen‘s lack of popularity. My peers explained to me that this argument was unclear and did not seem to fit in the context of my paper. After reading through my paper again, keeping their comments in mind, I switched around some of the argument’s wording and even decided to put it in another paragraph.
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